Jazza's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Alexander]

You're doing well! Your linework is clean, your colors and shading are simple but work well. There is a lack of interest in the image overall though, try challenging yourself with a scene, or a full body character! Keep up the good work

[The Mystery]

It's good to see you trying different styles and techniques, I'm sure you'll continue to experience improvement and joy as you do so. This piece is a bit confusing, to know what's happening, but it is at least visually interesting. Your lines could be a bit smoother overall, but the color contrast is nice. Keep up the good work

[Skulls]

Your shading is clean and your painting is well done, I will say that the side view is off and needs work, and that the piece itself doesn't seem too challenging or interesting, but your execution is good, keep up the good work!

[the change]

Very nice! You've done fantastically well with the hair texture, you must be very very patient! The details in the mouth and eyes are good and the skin tone is excellent. I will mention that the facial proportions are a bit off, the eyes should be more centered in the head, but overall you've done really well, keep up the great work!

[The Flash]

For a first digital artwork this is VERY clean, you're doing great. Did you copy/trace the pose? If so you have a good natural understanding of anatomy and proportion. if not, no shame bro, that's how we all got started, just keep challenging yourself and try and create some original works to keep improving. Thanks for sharing, keep it up!

Ackel responds:

Thanks Jazza and no, I did not copy the pose, I makes me happy that it may have crossed your mind. Keep up the great videos!

[Doggy]

It's always fun messing around with the new tablet when you get it, aye! Well, you've done a great job for someone using a new tool, good form and shading, lines are a little less than solid but still good, the image could use more interest, but as a drawing and tool use exercise you're on the right track for sure, keep it up :)

[Cosmic Chaos]

I love your balance of colors, detail and 'bizarre'. The ground painting is quite well done and a great use of color and shading. The image is interesting (as always) and always makes me smile a bit for some reason. Keep up the awesome work, I'm loving seeing you really push yourself with your coloring mate, keep it up!

[Ancient Modernista]

For someone new to digital painting you're off to a decent start, just keep going! It can be a tricky thing learning a new medium, let alone when you're surrounded by many people who are fairly experienced, so make sure you do it because you enjoy it, keep challenging yourself and you'll improve in no time. This image is good, your shading is fairly clean and the composition is interesting, as well as the character design. The form could be more solid though. Keep up the good work!

[Zombie]

Nice work, the colors are suited well to each other, your proportions are a bit off with the zombie but it's not such a big deal since zombies are allowed to look somewhat deformed hehe. Your landscape is the more impressive part of the image, and the lighting from the moon behind. Keep up the good work and thanks for sharing!

[Pokey Minch]

You should indeed be very proud! Your first digital painting shows good understanding of composition, color use, and basic shading. It's interesting to look at and strange, which is good. The form and painting could be more solid, they're a little whispy at the moment, but with time and practice your obvious potential will flourish, keep up the good work :)

DrApfelwurst responds:

Thanks for the review! :)
And it looks strange 'cause its from strange game ^^