Your piece holds its own fairly well in terms of its composition - the balance of where the viewerâEUTMs eye is drawn and how the piece is laid out is neat and compliments the image and style. The coloring of this piece lacks clarity, the overall feel is murky, which could be aleviated with more intense lighting and contrast, parhaps some rim lighting. This piece is decent, itl effectively conveys what you are trying to go for, so good work. Keep up the effort, and thanks for sharing your work with me!