Jazza's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Possessed]

Very nice, this is a great picture, you're progressing very well. The colors are very smokey and you captured a cool aesthetic. The anatomy is a bit off, the six-pack has too many sections, I can count 10 in view, so be careful of that, but the tone and colors work very much to the strength of this image, and the face looks cool. Good job, keep it up

[Samwich!]

A cute giggle-inducing image, very nice! The shading is good, you could be even more dramatic with your darker areas to be honest, especially when the shading has a lit of mid grey tones. Nice job, keep it up!

[my litle lady]

This is good and well painted, I'll be honest though it feels like its been traced. That's not9 a BAD thing, since we all learn through these methods. I'll also point out I can see the photostock watermark in the hair overlay, so not much effort has gone into certain areas of the image at least. Try taking your training wheels and challenge yourself, and you'll improve faster than you think.

[Martin Luther King]

Nice work, your shading is very smooth and well done. There's a slight lack of facial symmetry but that kind of skill comes with time and practice, you've done very well, keep it up!

[Fugu Rider]

Very cute hehe. I think you could afford to work with some background imagery in here of some kind, i dont know, its a nice picture but there's not much to comment on since its simple and well done, but in the way that is an advantage it's also something of a disadvantage. Keep up the good work, I look forward to seeing you challenge yourself a bit!

TBuKc responds:

Thanks for responses and inspiration. I'll try my best and even more next time

[The Dark Knight]

Great work! Especially for your first digital painting! A few things I've noticed, the end of his nose goes up a bit too high which makes the upper lip area too big and empty. Also theres a lot of contract and detail in the glove, but the batman himself seems void of that much attention as you have in the glove, so it would be good if they were a bit more even. There's not too much to be critical of here for your first painting though, great job, you should definitely keep it up!

[Forgotten Muse]

Nice! I like the layers of the head, with the skin, skull and then brain, all in their divisions. They are all painted uniquely and compliment each other well. I kind of feel like there could be more level-variation, as in, have the brain not follow the same silhouette since in reality the skull is quite thick and the brain isn't that close to the surface. I like the background, and figure sitting on the brain. Could it be that the deep symbolic meaning of this pic as that artists always have naked chicks on our brain? I sure hope so ;) Great work, keep it up!

[President Lincoln]

Great job! The challenge here would have been patience more than technique, since its a fairly famous image and you have lots of references, but you've done very well, and the stippling effect came across nicely. Keep it up!

[Binding of Isaac Tribute]

Haha a cute present idea. Your linework is good, colors are clean and rich, the image itself is very simple though, and while Its nice, there's not a lot for me to comment on since its a very 'safe' sort of image to draw. Good work! See how you go challenging yourself with some new ideas, otherwise, nice work, keep it up!

[In All My Dreams i Drown]

Great aesthetic, also the title is very awesome, captures a feel immediately. Your tone here is fantastic. Stylistically you could improve a bit, with some more solid linework and character form, but hey, we're all learning! Great job, keep it up.