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Nice aesthetic and a cool figure design. His proportions could improve, as could the linework in some places, but overall you've done well! Keep up the good work

I don't understand how people can actually manage to create art on touch screen phones and tablets, I've never been able to. Maybe my fingers are too chubby... either way you've done well here, nice use of colors, and even linework, considering it was done on a touchscreen device! Thanks for sharing

hondaccord96 responds:

Well the galaxy note 10.1 uses a stylus and wacom technology so it's almost like using a small cintiq, minus the attaching to a computer

Nice image - there's not a lot happening, but you've done well with your linework and color, and use of light and shade. I feel like there could be more detail like light rays in the water or some bubbles, to help set the scene underwater, that aside, good work and keep it up!

I got your PM just in time to say nice work, I hope your wife loves her birthday present! You did a lovely job, thanks for submitting to the showcase, keep it up!

Wardog4201 responds:

**This is his wife! Thank you for the birthday wishes and featuring his painting you just made my entire year!!!!!
Wardog4201 thank you for featuring this painting. I will continue to make art and post it in your showcase.

Wow, very detailed and impressive! Lots of props here friend, though I wish the digital upload were a little clearer, make sure to balance the contrast and clarity and optimize it as best you can before uploading. Other than that, very impressive work, keep it up :)

Really cool work here mate! Believe it or not my favorite part of the image is the fiery foreground with the weapons and ambient punch of warmth. The character himself is cute and well drawn, though his form could be slightly re-proportioned to properly suit the cartoony style. His abs look a bit weird, keep in mind the ab muscles are all pretty interlocked and form one large group of muscles in the core, so having them all look so separate is a bit off-putting. That aside you've done really really well here and I look forward to seeing more from you!

You've really come a long way! I had to remove a star since the picture felt familiar and I looked around and found someone else designed it, which you seemed to refer to in the description anyway so as long as you don't claim the design as your own you're good in my eyes, but I'm very pleased with your progress in the painting itself, your lines and shading are clear and crisp, and really well done. I look forward to seeing how you go on a design of your own!

The image is nice and captures a cool aesthetic. It's going for a rough sketchy look but in some ways it feels a little too sloppy so try not to go overboard with the style. Also remember to keep a feminine quality in the image, don't use to much linework on the bottom of the nose or over the upper lip, it removes some of the delicacy from the image. Overall you've done well but as with any artist there is always room for improvement, so keep it up!

Josiah Brooks is a full time YouTuber/Artist who likes music, beer, beef jerky, and writing profile summaries in the third person.

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