Jazza's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Nix]

VERY cool. I love his seriously cool expression, you've captured a fantastic feel of power in this picture, the blue lightning, the energy beam from his eye, fantastic. I have nothing bad to say about this, keep it up and thanks for sharing!

DarkNIX responds:

Thanks for the feature mate! :)

[Cyclops Stoner]

Haha nice, I like the character design, the smoke needs some work, and his form could be a bit more solid. Keep up the good work, thanks for sharing :)

[Batman]

Nice work, I like the sketchy style, though the proportions need some work. It'll come with time and practice, work on your hands, perspective and anatomy proportions, though I like the charming cartoony feel. Good work, thanks for sharing!

Onikage01 responds:

Sorry it took me so long to get back to you, been figuring how to navigate xD. Thank you very much for the advice, hopefully I can now do something great with the words parted to me :D, thanks again for your time.

[The Coocking Hut]

This is fantastic! Your understanding of environmental aesthetic is strong, the way the trees become more golden into the distance, the way the water reflects, and is transparent at the same time. I love this, great detail, linework, color, everything. I have nothing bad to say. Thanks for sharing!

taaki responds:

Thank you so much!!! I'm just honored for being featured on your Artist Showcase and your feedback is just sooo amazing. Thank you Jazza!

[Rock Lee's Dojo]

VERY nice. I love the image framing, your use of color and refinement of the linework are both very well done. I don't have anything bad to say about this, keep it up!

OzynO responds:

Thank you :D

[first comic page]

Nice work, you have a good understanding on how to set up comic panels to make them read well and be visually interesting. The main concerns with this image are mainly with how its been uploaded, it should be a higher resolution and better cropped, and scanning it if possible would work better than taking a photo. Thanks for sharing, keep it up!

[playstation]

Nice work! The characters are well done, as well as your use of color and the overall framing. The 'glow' to the earth makes it look less solid then you might want it to look. a better way to achieve that look could be by adding more intense lighting on the characters in the area of their bodies closest to the earth, which will make it look like the light is emanating from the planet onto them. Good work, thanks for sharing!

[Dragon Armor]

very nice! Your traditionally drawn artworks do feel more refined, clearly you've worked a lot on paper, which is a good thing, so the transition across can be a bit tough sometimes. What you have here is very good, at a glance its extremely detailed and well balanced, with clear understanding of lighting and shape, though with more observation some of the flaws pop out, the main one being that it feels a bit messy. Don't worry, if this is your first attempt at digital painting, it's only gonna get better, fantastic work, keep it up!