Jazza's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[God of War: Kratos]

This is good, I can tell you took your time and were careful to make it very detailed, but to be honest at the end of the day, it's an eye, and there's only so much you can observe or comment on about a picture of an eye, unless its particularly exceptional. I look forward to seeing how you go with a head/face or full body figure, I know if can be challenging but make sure to keep yourself challenged and you'll keep improving. Thanks for sharing, keep it up!

[pretty in pink]

Nice work, the colors are strong, and the theme and aesthetic are well executed. The proportions could use some work, her head is a little askew and feels like its trying to be a front-on pose, when in reality it'd be more to the side. also, frankly, in a 'sexy' pose like this the bum could be a bit more perky and pop out a bit ;) Nice work, keep it up!

[Lantern]

Very cool! I LOVE copic markers! I remember using them in high school. They are very fun. You've done a great job here, feels very well done, very pro-comic style. It could afford more interest, some kind of scene or more interesting pose, but what you've done is refined and well executed, good job!

[Game Grumps - Jon and Arin]

Nice work! I can tell you've paid particular attention to coloring and lighting on their faces. You've done a good job here, could could even afford to make the lighting a bit more extreme. The face shapes and form of the figures in general could be a little more interesting but that all comes with time and practice anyway. Thanks for sharing!

[Edward Elric]

Nice work, for your first digial artwork and having done it with a mouse, this is very well done! The coloring looks good, the linework is nice, the lines could afford some thin and thick contrasts, also overall there are tiny white gaps on the line edges where you've colored in. Thanks for sharing

[Stranger in the Woods]

Nice, i like the soft palette and colors, it has a nice ambiance and ethereal feel. I do feel like you could expand the palette a bit, it's pure yellow at the moment, and you could keep the same feel but use different tints of warm colors, golden yellows, desaturated bright yellows, light oranges etc. Great work, thanks for sharing

MrReptilianhumanoid responds:

Thanks Jazza!

[Queen of Grayness]

Great job! For your first artwork you should be VERY pleased with this, you have a lot to learn, but all beginners do, so don't worry, this is a VERY good place to be while you're starting off. Remember have fun with it and work hard. You've done well here especially with your brush work and shading. Keep it up, thanks for sharing!

[Ceramic Samurai]

That's a lot of detail! I'd recommend focusing a bit on the characters silhouette and pose before working on so much fine detail, it looks good but feels a little lost in a sea of detail, when its also hard to define the main features of the characters body and pose. Thanks for sharing, keep it up!

[smooth shading in flash]

Nice work, I can tell you spent a lot of time on that shading, the line work is solid, it could look better if the lines had some contrast, thin to thick in different areas. Also the characters face could be a bit more solid and shapely. A good attempt, keep it up!

InanimateMadness responds:

thanks