Jazza's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dixie kong fanart]

As you point out yourself, your background could use some work, but the overall tone of the image is very good, clean linework, well executed character and pose, keep up the good work, thanks for sharing!

[Graffiti Piece | Character]

Nice and simple, clean linework, fun character design, could afford a little more of a solid feel overall, good work, thanks for sharing!

[just a girl]

I like this, its fairly simple but at the same time flows really well. The sketchy style works in its favor, and her eyes, ERMAHGERD they pop out really well! Fantastic work, keep it up!

[Nyan Cat Vs. Slender Man]

SOMETHING TELLS ME YOU WATCH SAM GREEN? lol He's a friend of mine and I saw him post this competition. You've done a good job, this is very cool! Nyan cat seems a little weird to be honest, like the head is trying to be more realistic, when the tone of Nyan cat feels like it should be more cartoony. Slendy looks great, and the theme/action in this pic work out very well! Great job!

SkovMH responds:

Once again dear Jazza, you're right! ( Damn you Australian people! )
But i can see what you mean with the nyan cat head, i'll try to keep it on one style :)
AGAIN! The review is much appreciated!

[Drake- the metal hand warrior]

Great work! Your proportions here are good, so is your painting style. The background is simple, but in a way that enhances the overall image which is great. The face could afford to have a bit more defined detail, it feels almost like you hesitate to draw any strong shapes or lines on the face in case you make a mistake, but what you have there is great! It just needs to be a bit 'louder'. :) Great work, keep it up!

[El Primer Trago]

I like it, its simple but has a nice aesthetic. The lines could afford to be more intentional looking, and the proportions seem slightly off (his head seems quite large, when the image even though in a cutout style, seems to be more realistic with the proportions. I like the simple minimal use of colors and dramatic feel. Keep it up, thanks for sharing!

[Cat Woman]

You did a good job with her body, her face looks too masuline so try and practice more feminine features in the face. I have trouble with that kind of thing myself quite often. The colors are very well done, good work! The background seems a bit filler though, something more interesting or even minimal would work well, I just think with it being a kind of 'half' background it feels let down. Overall you've done well, keep it up and thanks for sharing!

[Ocean survivor]

Nice work, painting a sky and ocean can be really challenging. The cliffs look a bit too random, like they were drawn by random lines being thrown around, perhaps try being more constructive in how you build the landscape, the tone of the image is nice though, nice light from the sky and good framing. Keep it up!

[Untitled]

This is simply stunning! The wings and hair, and bright tone and radiance to the skin make this really beautiful to look at, awesome work! I feel like the face needs a little work, not much, the eyes seem a little too far to the side, just by a pinch, but the main thing would be the lips, I think they need more color and to be smaller, to compliment her dainty size and feminine feel. The skin tone of the hands also gets a bit lost in the same skin tone of the upper chest. Great work, this is a very lovely piece, thanks for sharing!

Londones responds:

Thank you, I did lose twice 5h of work on this piece maybe that's why I couldn't really get myself to polish even more than I did. You're right now that I look at the eyes again, oh god haha... I'll use your advice for the next pieces I do, well the ones where I do a painterly-ish drawing.

[Hide in the Fog]

Nice work! This pic really has the pose in its favor. Its very strong, great proportions, and convincingly dramatic without being over-the-top. I like the shading and stuff, you might want to work on the hand a little, and maybe adding some more interest to the background immediately behind him and towards the top. Great work, keep it up!