I didn't know bdsm comics existed. though saying that makes me realize how naive I am. Anyhow, great pic! Especially for having worked in pencil you've done a fantastic job! The main worry I find is that the shades are a bit flat and everything looks a bit intertwined so it can be hard to read the image in areas. I recommend really pushing the contrasts in lights and shades, and have softer backgrounds when using pencil so the figures and central points of focus can stand out. Good work! Thanks for sharing