Jazza's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dr. Who]

It's MUCH better seeing you do original illustrations. I want to see more of them, you have a good style and can only improve, keep it up!

[Villain 3: Star Wars VII]

You've done very well! The pose is very strong, so is the concept and coloring. The shading of the character is a little wispy and lacks solidity in places, and the piece is yearning for an environment of some kind, that aside you're improving steadily and challenging yourself, great work, keep it up!

[Old Man Cruising]

This is a funny and well executed image. Your painting style lacks refinement a little, which just needs a bit of smoothing out, and your lines are a little less than solid, but your proportions, character style and image composition are all very good, so keep it up!

TomislavArtz responds:

I will try to improve my style.. Thank you!

[Sceptic sword]

This is stronger than your other artoworks, so I can see you are improving! Your lines are solid and your colors work well. I feel you should work with some more shading on the character. Your pose is decent, it could be more ambitious, but for a beginner I'll say you're doing very well, so just keep going!

[The Lonely Tree]

Wow this is lovely! Your color balance and image composition work well. I wish the image were uploaded at a higher resolution since, particularly with traditional mediums of art, I like to see the details and textures of the raw art. You've done well and should be proud, I look forward to seeing more, keep it up!

[Training time!]

You've got a good start here, stylistically I can see what you're going for, I feel that it would be balanced out with some more rounded lines too. The hard curved lines work well in some areas like the abdomen/waist, the neck and middle of the torso, and the triceps, but I feel softer rounder lines for the shoulders and chest would work even better. Your linework could be cleaner and the skin color is a little too yellow, try adding a bit more pink. Great job, keep it up!

[Punch]

I'm adding you to my favorites. You have such great technical skill and artistic instincts, I'm envious of your talent. Your accuracy in the image portrayal here is fantastic, and the selection of the image and the way you pulled it off the way you have is just beyond impressive. I can't wait to see more from you.

Disson4nce responds:

Thanks so much for the kind words, the favorite, and featuring this on your channel. I really appreciate it!

[Lautrec of Carim]

This character has a cute style and proportions, you've done well! The lines are solid and clean.Your use of yellow is too much though, and your shading could be more extreme. Those things aside for a beginner you're doing well, so just keep working at it!

[I'll Be Here...]

Great work! Thanks for the plug in the comments ;) Your execution here is very good, the main thing lacking is visual interest though. Some kind of environment or challenge in character perspective or pose. Your lines and colors are very solid and well done though so as a painting exercise you should be pleased! Keep it up!

ZaXo-KenIchi responds:

Thank you. Hopefully I can work more on actually implementing painted backgrounds soon.

And you're welcome :) Mentioning your artistic knowledge is the least I could do.