Jazza's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Imp]

This is very good! There is a lack of balance in areas, the hair is too pale and hesitantly shaded, while in contrast, the lips are rich and strong to the point of being too apparent. Your shading is good if a little rough, but overall your use of lighting and the image composition is clean, and well executed. Keep it up!

AniToons responds:

Thanks, yeah i agree. I think my biggest issue was rushing and wanting to get it out there and show everyone so i missed areas which needed the extra focus. Taken a step back now and appreciating all the small details.

[Windrunner]

SO COOL! Jesus! I love the style, such an awesome execution. This one is going into my favorites. Really, awesome!! I have noting negative to say about this!

[Castle Crashers]

Good job! Its a cute image with simple lines and color but its effective. Your characters lack some solidity and the image lacks some interest but overall its a good start so keep it up!

[Tron girl 2.0]

What an impressive piece! Such interesting colors and shapes, you've done really well here! To give it a more 'glowing' look I tend to like adding a color closer to white in the central area of where the glow is emitted from. Not TOO much but enough. A good extreme example of this is a light sabre in star wars. You'll notice they are pure white in the middle and the color only begins after the glowing central area is ended. That aside you've done really well here and while the form could be more feminine, you've done extremely well. Keep it up!

[Ender Dragon]

Fantastic work! The attention to detail in this image is very impressive. It's rare to come across such a well drawn dragon since their forms can be difficult - but you rose to the challenge extremely well! You should be proud, keep it up!

Tyton89 responds:

Thanks for the review as well as the feature on your channel.

[Moby Dick]

VERY nice! Great style and composition, very clean and well executed linework, and most impressive to me is your use of color in your shading. Too often when people shade they use only darker or lighter variations of the color of that area. You effectively mix various other colors like the subtle purples in the orange octopus, pinks and green in the blue creature at the front, etc. Very great work. Keep it up, and thanks for sharing!

Bdlsito responds:

Thanks a lot jazz I'll keep it up, thanks for the oportunity to be features in your youtube channel :D

[the boogie man]

Not bad, your image could use some optimization though, making traditional art look good digitally can be tricky sometimes. Keep up the effort!

Death-Rig responds:

Thank you for you're opinion. Getting a response from a talented artist such as you're self is very appreciated. I'll keep improving as much as possible.

[Black Avenger]

Its funny, but I would be wary of offending people by using racial stereotypes. Though frankly, I enjoy all of the things featured in the image myself, and I'm as white as the get.

[Hairy Gorilla]

I like your style! Crisp and clean, with good use of shape and lines. Your lines have good weight variation to them too, and the overall image has a good texture to it. I would say that the image lacks visual interest, like there should be a view of some kind behind the central figure or something, but what you've shown us here alone is very good, thanks for sharing!

DMFmachala responds:

Cheer's Jazza,
Later Down the line there will be more characters and overall peice.

[Holiday Mood On!]

I like how clean the work looks, you have a good style. The whole piece does look somewhat stretched horizontally though. Keep it up, I'd like to see what else you can do! :)

jerrystupidmouse responds:

Thanks Jazza :D