Jazza's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Promotional Tim episode pic]

Nice work, good composition and character design. I can tell your shadows were done with a grey, be wary of that, it makes things look muddy. I recommend using a darker shade of the color you are shading instead of a grey or black. Otherwise good work, keep it up!

[Tenth]

Good job! I can tell you're really working hard to give your images detail and accuracy in your shading and coloring. You're doing well! I recommend using softer strokes for your shading, the hars lines such as in the ear make it look rougher than it needs to look. You're doing really well, keep it up!

AniToons responds:

Appreciate the tip!! Thanks!

[First work on tablet]

For your first piece using a tablet you've done well! With time and practice you'll continue to improve and develop a polished style, but for now you're in the learning phase so make sure to enjoy it and take every lesson you can with you. Thanks for sharing, keep it up!

[Corrupt pollution]

This image has a high level of atmosphere and polish, especially compared to some of your other works - it's clear you're improving! I love the two human figures in the image, at first I didn't notice them, then as I kept enjoying the image they emerged, which speaks a lot to the value of the piece, it kept my attention and fed me more. Great work, keep it up!

DrApfelwurst responds:

Hey thanks!
Well I wanted the two figures not to cath somebod. eye, instead
I wanted them to melt into the picture , so you can see the whole image as one!

[Waiting For The Scotsman]

nice work! This piece has an andy worhol feel to it! The portrayal of the image through 4 different mediums is effective and visually interesting, and you pull it off well. The proportions and solidity of the main figure could use some work, and the colors are slightly muddy, but the overall balance and sense of visual interest is strong and well done. Keep it up!

[Car Jack]

I imagine it would mess me up! Its a visually very interesting image, well balanced and clean. I admire your willingness to try different and new styles and mediums, you always seem successful when you try! Keep up the good work! Thanks for sharing

YakovlevArt responds:

Fore sure. Thanks Jazza! I have try to play with different techniques so as to not get bored, but also maybe teach myself something new.

[Modern Eastwood Western]

Nice work! Cowboy art is something I've never had sent to me so it's nice to see something different. You did well, the balance of the image is great, a nice strong orange back to contrast and compliment the cool colors of the central figure. Your linework is a little thick and lacking style, and you could afford more shading, that aside you did well, keep it up!

[Nerds]

I like your character design! You soft colored lines and pastel colors throughout make for a really cool feeling retro looking picture that fits your theme. Keep up the good work!

[Minecraft Golem]

He's a cool shaped and interestingly posed character, stylistically fitting your subject theme. It is however a very simple subject theme which doesn't really cause people to challenge themselves to create something adequate. You've done well, considering your other work though, I feel like you can challenge yourself a lot more. Keep it up!

[Dancing Monkey]

Hahaha this makes me smile! For that you get extra points. I'm glad you liked my dancing monkey ;) You painted him very well too, great work! I also like the addition of the fire behind him and how you clearly communicated the light hitting the back of the monkey. Great job!

BoykaA responds:

Thank you :D :)