Jazza's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Green Eye]

Lovely work here, your brush strokes are clean and smooth. The eye is detailed and pretty, you've done well. I will say though that there's not much to say about a picture of an eye. It can be aesthetically pleasing, but at the end of the day there's nothing much more communicated by it other than, there is an eye. I look forward to seeing what else you can do! Good work

crisscrossrain responds:

thanks for the feedback i appreciate it =)

[Nature's Grace]

Very nice, you've spent a lot of time on the detail, which shows clearly. The objects lack a feeling of solidity which can be resolved by making sure edges are strong and shading is solid. The colors and composition are very nice and you should be proud! Thanks for sharing

[The Matrix : Neo]

Nice work, you've done well replecating Neo. The skin tone shouldn't be shaded darker in black though, use a desaturated dark brown or something less clashing. His form lacks solidity as well, but overall you've done a good job and should be proud, so keep up the hard work!

JudePerera responds:

Gee Thanx Jazza... I'll do Better Next Time

[Werewolf]

Nice work! The werewolf chatacter has a lot of good stylization and a cool pose. The piece has good colors and everything is pretty well balanced. I will say that the linework feels a little flat, it's all one width and has thin white edges on either side of them. Otherwise, you've done great work, thanks for sharing and keep it up!

[wonders]

A fun theme for an image, and your robots have nice charm to them. The piece is pretty simple, but that's ok since you were going for a very cartoony feel overall. I will say you should work on the solidity and characterization of your forms, but overall you've done well - nice colors, clever idea, good composition, keep it up and thanks for sharing!

[The Zabrak Droid]

Just WOW. The way you did this is very impressive, the metallic colors and shading are just out of this world and fit the character to perfection. You give a thick sense of atmosphere and really shine in creating a menacing yet aesthetically pleasing artwork. I'm adding this to my favorites, thank you for sharing!

Nempatriarch responds:

Thanks man!! glad you like it!

[Ragons]

I like your color palette for this, it looks dreamy and flows well. The piece lacks solidity and a sense of place, which are things that develop over time to keep applying yourself and you'll be sure to improve. Thanks for sharing, and keep it up!

[Dad]

Nice work, I can tell you had a lot of creative fun with this. I do wonder what you're trying to say about your dad in this picture, if you are. IE if you're trying to show his personality, or perhaps your view of him. Otherwise it might have simply been an aesthetic adventure! Regardless, it's well done. Your shading could be smoother and the image needs some optimization for the digital upload, you always should make sure the contrast and clarity of the image is as good as it can be before upload. Good job, thanks for sharing, and keep it up!

[Cosmic Joker]

Nice work, I really like your style as always. Are you bored of hearing me say that yet? Anyhow, very well done, the piece is interesting and filled with meticulous detail that is a joy to spend time looking at. The micro and macro elements of your images always compliment each other greatly. Keep up the great work!

MisterHerbal responds:

Jazza I really appreciate your constructive feedback man. Keep it coming. Some of my work I upload is a bit older than the shading ones, but I should get down to making new stuff very soon. :)

[For Passion]

Good job, the angle is very well done considering how difficult such extreme angles are to pull off. The colors feel a little too saturated in places, and I only realised the object in the bottom left was a crystal after reading your description, but hey no judgement there, crystals are hard as hell to make look believable. Overall a great pic, keep up the good work!