Jazza's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Riao and Alex having lunch]

This look cool, I like the theme, it's less impressive than your other works though I'll be honest, the view is a little flat and the characters don't have much going on to grab my attention. Don't be discouraged, you've done well, but you have a lot of potential so I won't go easy on you! Keep up the good work and keep challenging yourself!

Zera-Luminariam responds:

me and my friend did draw this year ago and now looking back yea it does look flat

[demon smoke]

Looks like someone pays attention and knows I love skulls! lol. You've done very well, love the form and shadow, great line work, the image balance is a little asymmetrical which puts me off it a little but that small qualm aside, this is a skilfully executed cool looking piece. Keep it up, thanks for sharing!

askionkataskion responds:

thanks homie!

[Character In My Show]

Keep working, and try and challenge yourself a bit more! This is very similar to the other pieces of yours I have reviewed, try doing a full figure in an environment, or working with more detail. You're doing well, but if you want to improve, try new and challenging things!

[Girl]

Doing well, her form could be more solid, and the proportions need work, try and balance her height out more and work for a more feminine look, big butt and boobs don't always make a woman feminine, in fact its more about how the limbs, stomach, neck and face work together to create a feminine look. Overall though, your colors are very strong, and so is the composition, keep up the good work!

hondaccord96 responds:

Appreciate the input

[I heard you like Mac & Cheese]

Haha, made me chuckle, nice work! For a first digital painting, even though its a simple image, its well done and quirky. Keep up the good work!

[Wake up call]

This is simple but holds a nice feel to it. The shading in the cloth is a little harsh between the dark and light, and hides the figure of the female a bit too much, but the face of the female and flow of her hair is strong and well done, keep it up and thanks for sharing!

[Borderlands Psycho]

Even though this is a direct copy of another piece of art, I don't have much issue with that since its clear you're enjoying yourself and did a great job! That being said, it would be more beneficial to you, to practice drawing your own work, but that can be a slow process to become confident with, so go at your own pace. Otherwise, you're doing well and obviously have potential, so keep it up!

[Remorse]

There's little to comment on with a picture like this because there's little to see, visually, but for what you attempted, you did very well. The form is clear, the shading is perfect and the aesthetic is strong, keep up the good work!

alagarse responds:

Thanks, and I appreciate you putting me in an artist showcase!