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Nice picture! It seems inventive and well done, but as you mentioned, is difficult to see. Try to make the quality of the image you make as best as it can be so it properly represents the art you created, otherwise sadly, no matter how much effort you put into your piece, it is let down by lack of quality in the upload. Keep going though! thanks for sharing.

Well done! The picture seems traced though I could be wrong. You used color and lines well here, the main thing I have to say is it just feels like an image I would have seen a thousand times before of sonic, i'd like to see how you go in challenging yourself and doing something different, even if it were still sonic, trying to reinvent him somehow, or at least pick a unique pose or environment to put him in. overall a good start, keep it up :)

Great job! I can see you've taken on board some of the things I mentioned in my last review, in particular regarding the sahding style. You've done well in this piece, it's well composed, well draw, has good use of line and color, and a nice cold aesthetic, which as we all know is perfect for John Snows part in the series! Great work, and keep challenging yourself, you're definitely improving!

Good use of color and lines, though the composition is a little simple, i'd like to see what you could do in creating a scene or placing him in an environment. Overall good job, keep it up!

You nailed the aesthetic, however the technical execution feels sloppy. Your colors and framing are all very good, proportions, etc, but everything feels like it was thrown together in a rush. I'd love to see how something like this would look with smoother brush strokes and more detail. As a concept piece though you've done very well, keep it up :)

Great job for your first painting! Good use of color and decent linework, though be wary of using different line thicknesses, IE in the dress and the rest of the body, its a little distracting. You've done well, keep it up!

You're getting ambitious, which is fantastic! Keep challenging yourself! The proportions are a bit off in places, but the images composition and imagination are very well conveyed. Your use of colors is also well picked and laid out. Keep up the great work!

ArcadeHero responds:

Thank you man. I focus on work right now! :)

Awesome work! The face is angles ever so slightly to the left which throws me off a little, but that's the only thing I could find to be picky about. Your linework is very good, your color tone and shading in particular are very well balanced and impressive. I look forward to seeing what else you do! Keep it up :)

Get a tablet! If you did this on an iPad, with a finger, you clearly could do so many cooler things with proper tools! And iPad is NOT an artists tool to be honest, at least in my opinion, it inhibits what artists would want to use to be more efficient, but the fact that you did this under those circumstances is impressive! Good job, keep it up :)

Its hard to understand what this piece is exactly, the composition is simple if a little messy. I likew the skull shape and linework, and the colors are solid, its just hard to understand the piece overall. Keep at it though, and thanks for sharing!

Josiah Brooks is a full time YouTuber/Artist who likes music, beer, beef jerky, and writing profile summaries in the third person.

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