Jazza's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Cybrid]

That's one strange creature... It's unfortunate that all of the environment was not painted by you but taken from elsewhere, that aside, you've done well :) Your linework here, while appropriate, lacks style. The most effective way to create a good visual sense of style with linework is to work with more organic shaped, and to vary the linework thickness throughout. Keep up the good work, thanks for sharing!

[Samus Aran]

For a beginner you're doing really well, keep doing what you're doing and keep yourself motivated and you'll see improvement comes quite quickly! The background you've got here is simple, but appropriate, and much better than excluding a background all together like many other pieces I see seem to do. It's clear to me that you really challenged yourself with this piece, you're trying various advanced techniques which are really hard to get right, and while some areas aren't perfect, the ambition and care taken bring it to a level of which you should be proud. Overall, great work, great colors and image balance, overall, very impressive, keep it up and thanks for sharing :)

rishro29 responds:

Thanks a whole lot (: Nice to hear positive feedback from someone who is so artistically talented. I always have trouble keeping myself motivated and getting ideas so I always seem to slack off and lose my edge.

[Catwoman]

Really great work, Your piece holds its own fairly well in terms of its composition - the balance of where the viewerâEUTMs eye is drawn and how the piece is laid out is neat and compliments the image and style. stylistically you've done an amazing job, overall, very impressive, keep it up and thanks for sharing :)

[Girl]

It's clear to me that you really challenged yourself with this piece, you're trying various advanced techniques which are really hard to get right, and while some areas aren't perfect, the ambition and care taken bring it to a level of which you should be proud. The composition is simple and the colors are soft and mix together well. Great effort, keep it up and thanks for sharing! :)

[Baraka of Mortal Kombat]

It's clear to me that you really challenged yourself with this piece, you're trying various advanced techniques which are really hard to get right, and while some areas aren't perfect, the ambition and care taken bring it to a level of which you should be proud. Nice painting style and composition, the color is good too. The background you've got here is simple, but appropriate, and much better than excluding a background all together like many other pieces I see seem to do. Overall, nice job, keep it up and thanks for sharing!

[Sasuke]

A good effort, The background you've got here is simple, but appropriate, and much better than excluding a background all together like many other pieces I see seem to do. It's clear to me that you really challenged yourself with this piece, you're trying various advanced techniques which are really hard to get right, and while some areas aren't perfect, the ambition and care taken bring it to a level of which you should be proud. Overall, you've done well, keep it up and thanks for sharing :)

[1 player vs 2 player]

For a beginner you're doing really well, keep doing what you're doing and keep yourself motivated and you'll see improvement comes quite quickly! The recycling of aspects of the image is obvious though, and Your image could be improved with more work on the environment, there isn't much happening here to compliment the piece. You might not need to add too much, but something simple to help balance the colors and lighting would significantly compliment your piece. A good start, keep it up and thanks for sharing!

[rooftop]

VERY impressive! Not only is the composition of this piece appropriate, it's also stunningly clever and well thought out! The eye is led exactly as you want it to be, and visual interest is strong throughout, with a good balance of perspective and detail. the painting style is somewhat cloudy and lacking in solidity but that aside the overall balance of the image is great, keep it up and tanks for sharing :)

RimKeLLo responds:

Thanks you for critique. I really appreciate it.

[The Card Wizard]

For a beginner you're doing really well, keep doing what you're doing and keep yourself motivated and you'll see improvement comes quite quickly! Keep up your effort, your composition is clever and fairly well executed, though I'd recommend working with a slightly more pink tone with skin. That aside, great work, thanks for sharing :)

SergeantLarge responds:

Thank you so much for your feedback, Jazza! Please forgive me, it has been a busy few weeks. I appreciate your taking time to look at these works and promoting the up-and-comers.

[Gandalf The Grey :)]

VERY impressive. Not only is the composition of this piece appropriate, it's also stunningly clever and well thought out! The eye is led exactly as you want it to be, and visual interest is strong throughout, with a good balance of perspective and detail. Your shading style is clean and very well done, overall, astounding work, keep it up and thanks for sharing :)

Iceey23 responds:

Thank you so much :D
I wish you would commented on the beard, because I don't like it for some reason :D