Jazza's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Iron Man Study]

Nice work! I'll also mention I really like the other drawing you have uploaded here. Anyhow, You've done a great job with the mechanical details in this pic, and the pose and crop of the upper torso and focus on the arms is really clever. The image could stand to use some shading, learning to color something in to look metallic is quite hard but I'm sure you'd learn from the experience. Great job, thanks for sharing!

XXXFreeFlowXXX responds:

First off . AHHHHH. So crazy to have you respond. I know it's not as hard as if you were trying to have Emma Watson reply to something but still AHHHHH.

Yes sadly the reason why this has no shading is that when i was working on it, I lost my PS as I said and I never got around to working on it again.

[Stranger in the Woods]

Nice, i like the soft palette and colors, it has a nice ambiance and ethereal feel. I do feel like you could expand the palette a bit, it's pure yellow at the moment, and you could keep the same feel but use different tints of warm colors, golden yellows, desaturated bright yellows, light oranges etc. Great work, thanks for sharing

MrReptilianhumanoid responds:

Thanks Jazza!

[smooth shading in flash]

Nice work, I can tell you spent a lot of time on that shading, the line work is solid, it could look better if the lines had some contrast, thin to thick in different areas. Also the characters face could be a bit more solid and shapely. A good attempt, keep it up!

InanimateMadness responds:

thanks

[Nix]

VERY cool. I love his seriously cool expression, you've captured a fantastic feel of power in this picture, the blue lightning, the energy beam from his eye, fantastic. I have nothing bad to say about this, keep it up and thanks for sharing!

DarkNIX responds:

Thanks for the feature mate! :)

[Batman]

Nice work, I like the sketchy style, though the proportions need some work. It'll come with time and practice, work on your hands, perspective and anatomy proportions, though I like the charming cartoony feel. Good work, thanks for sharing!

Onikage01 responds:

Sorry it took me so long to get back to you, been figuring how to navigate xD. Thank you very much for the advice, hopefully I can now do something great with the words parted to me :D, thanks again for your time.

[The Coocking Hut]

This is fantastic! Your understanding of environmental aesthetic is strong, the way the trees become more golden into the distance, the way the water reflects, and is transparent at the same time. I love this, great detail, linework, color, everything. I have nothing bad to say. Thanks for sharing!

taaki responds:

Thank you so much!!! I'm just honored for being featured on your Artist Showcase and your feedback is just sooo amazing. Thank you Jazza!

[Rock Lee's Dojo]

VERY nice. I love the image framing, your use of color and refinement of the linework are both very well done. I don't have anything bad to say about this, keep it up!

OzynO responds:

Thank you :D

[The Spine!]

Nice work, for someone so young and new to this you've done a very good job. A few things to keep in mind, first off, try and crop your high resolution image so it isn't so overbearingly large when people zoom in. Also, watch your coloring in, I assume you're going for a certain style in having it go over the lines like that, but it sends to just look a bit messy. Overall good work, and thanks for sharing. Keep it up!

Pachydermus responds:

Thanks a lot! I'll keep that in mind.