Jazza's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bob the wizard]

Hehe I like it, simple and cute. The figure has a lot of character and the colors work well, especially the main featured colors of purple and red which work well off each other. Good, job, keep it up!

Hoen responds:

O MAI GOD !!!! You actually responded thank you so much Jazza :) !
I will keep up the work :D !!!

[Medli]

Nice composition and coloring! The proportions of the figure could use a little work, and a little shimmer and detail in the ocean would help, but overall you've done well, keep it up!

KyeKai responds:

Thanks for your review I appreciate getting your feedback

[Fire Mage]

You should absolutely be proud of this. Its clear that you really challenged yourself and tried a variety of techniques, you chose a challenging pose and effects, and while there is a lot that could be better, there's a lot more you should be happy about and rather than telling you what could be better, I'd rather tell you to keep it up! Keep challenging yourself and you'll improve out of sight. Great work. Keep it up and thanks for sharing!

Frissyboy responds:

Thank you so much and it is clear that I have much to learn :D but I am proud of this piece and I think I always will be :D

[Riao and Alex having lunch]

This look cool, I like the theme, it's less impressive than your other works though I'll be honest, the view is a little flat and the characters don't have much going on to grab my attention. Don't be discouraged, you've done well, but you have a lot of potential so I won't go easy on you! Keep up the good work and keep challenging yourself!

Zera-Luminariam responds:

me and my friend did draw this year ago and now looking back yea it does look flat

[demon smoke]

Looks like someone pays attention and knows I love skulls! lol. You've done very well, love the form and shadow, great line work, the image balance is a little asymmetrical which puts me off it a little but that small qualm aside, this is a skilfully executed cool looking piece. Keep it up, thanks for sharing!

askionkataskion responds:

thanks homie!

[Girl]

Doing well, her form could be more solid, and the proportions need work, try and balance her height out more and work for a more feminine look, big butt and boobs don't always make a woman feminine, in fact its more about how the limbs, stomach, neck and face work together to create a feminine look. Overall though, your colors are very strong, and so is the composition, keep up the good work!

hondaccord96 responds:

Appreciate the input

[Remorse]

There's little to comment on with a picture like this because there's little to see, visually, but for what you attempted, you did very well. The form is clear, the shading is perfect and the aesthetic is strong, keep up the good work!

alagarse responds:

Thanks, and I appreciate you putting me in an artist showcase!

[Mindflayer sketch 2]

I like what I see, but it's difficult to see! From a distance the mindflayer figure is really cool but hard to make out because its in pencil and far away, but when I click to zoom in, its too large and pixelly. I recommend working on your rendering and uploading methods, otherwise from the little I can see, he look really cool! Keep it up!

Araita responds:

Thanks a lot for the kind words sir! About the size... I know, should have resized it before, still struggling with the site to get it reuploaded in a un-crazier dimension.
Working on an inked, cleaner, and more colorful version of this from time to time, so I might end up sending it to you in one or two weeks if I manage to finish it.

[The Apocalypse Prince]

Nice work, the colors are soft and pleasing to the eye, as is the character and his expression. The shading could be used to give him more of a solid look, at the moment, while the soft feel works in the piece's favor, it still lacks solidity. Try using different brushes, or utilizing clipping masks to maintain the edges of the piece. Otherwise, great work, keep it up!

CarimeJackson responds:

Thank you soo much for taking the time to watch this and give me such a useful review!