Jazza's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[::battle of grim island::]

YAY!! GREAT WORK

FIRST REVIEW YAY!!

great work!! art was very consistent and fluid.
was a real pleasure to do the music for you friend, thanx for allowing me to be a part of your wonderful storytelling!!

5/5
10/10

[Awesome Compilation Vol 6]

sorry, not impressed

i know this series is popular and all, but the humor is stupid in my opinion, and the art is just part of the random look. too effortless in how its able to be made to be deserving of the score it has i'm sorry.

put a LITTLE more effort in plz.

Egoraptor responds:

Just the other day I watched your Paladin DVD and was impressed at your improvement and devotion in the field of animation.

Hopefully you will enjoy my upcoming series. I respect you a lot and it upsets me to know you're unenthusiastic about my work.

Though, I suppose it's to be expected from what I have shown.

I CAN CHYYAAAANGE.

[How not to die']

great work

even tho animation is really simple and has no perspective

even tho sound is lacking, and some of your gore effects were clearly you half spitting into a mic

even tho characters have no expression, and no real interaction

this was a really really funny toon and i loved watching it. The random ness of things like the fallen tree and the spring from the toaster were very nicely executed, and the motion of the characters (minly upon death) was always nice too. The small lacks in art and sound weren't that noticable next to the good humor. keep it up, i'd watch more for sure.

5/5 8/10

[Warhammer 40k Tribute 2]

incredible art

this was spectacular, really. the art was great. i would have enjoyed more of a plot and unfortunately i think this area is always neglected in anything to do with warhammer 40,000 tributes.

i used to play the game and i still love the figures, you did them much justice. congratulations on a spectacularly well made movie

5/5 9/10

[Dry Stone Walling]

great job

nicely executed visuals and good message. i'm not a fan of the song's style but it suited the animation perfectly.

the shading and feel of the art is quite impressive, there were a few places where i got distracted, first and foremost at the start when he was walking around. the walking clips are very awkward.

apart from this great job, i enjoyed watching it!

5/5, 9/10

[Abandoned Outbreak]

good job mark!

marky my man!
first front page eh? very nice. keep up the great work, some very nice use of 3D here. depending on your frame rate i recommend speeding up the 3d export animation from swift 3D, then when re-importing them split them to one 3D frame every 2 frames, so the animation is still relatively smooth but loadtime will be cut DRASTICALLY.
incredible job dude, you've come a long way!

[skipdays:part1]

very nice!

brtha! nice job
jokes were pretty funny, some caught me by suprise
if i could give advise, i'd just start off by saying, you should move thier mouths from the side of thier head to below thier noses/snouts whatever. other then that a good job, a series i would watch more of-
-JAZZA

silvaness responds:

hey watsup!!!
thanks for the advice!

[Pancake Mines]

not so funny dude...

well. first off let me say i dont give mean reviews for the SAKE of giving mean reviews.
secondly, i am a fan of your FUNNY submission

BUT:::
this one, had not good jokes, story or skilled aniamtion. the klay figures have always looked and been animated like 'krap' and the only reason i liked certain ones is coz of the humor, but this is just... pointless. DONT lose good jokes coz if you do then; What's left?

refrigirator art

you can do better, this isnt to bring you down but to encourage you to try a bit more

[PALADIN episode X]

BAHAHAHAHAAAAA!!!!!

you made me a very proud man today!
thank you!!

that was a very fast to the response to the competition announce too!

congrats, i LOVED it

[Pico's Time Tank]

Very Impressive!

this was very well made, you should be proud. the key things that stood out to me were the great camera changes and time changes (slowing and speeding) where needed. The frame by frame animation although at few times a little shakey, was overall very impressive and well implimented.

Awesome style, and a very worthy pico day submission.

my only tiffs were that you could have been a little moe adventurous with the sound effects and music, and perhaps in the demon scene when he was dodging all those stopms, add a bit more FBF to the demons leg rather then it just being a single tweened grafik...

very well done friend!

The-Swain responds:

The number of frames that the Demon/Balrog leg spent stomping just didn't add up. There was a mild amount of FBF in another stomp shot that was totally unnoticeable, so it seemed like a necessary sin to let it slide there.

Besides, we had hoped that Pico's dodging animationg would make up for it :)