awesome
one of the most creative well animated funny submission i have seen in a good long time. i'm not a fan of that much swears, lol, but apart from that it was funny as hell man, good work!-
-J
awesome
one of the most creative well animated funny submission i have seen in a good long time. i'm not a fan of that much swears, lol, but apart from that it was funny as hell man, good work!-
-J
LOL they keep getting better
i love your work man, more and more. I can tell you reuse a lot of the same imagery to keep the episodes coming more rapidly, which isn't an overall bad thing because you vary the story between each one quite a lot and add more as well, like the city the people were ion and stuff. OH and you brought back boobs, lawl.
great work, VERY funny and smart. keep it up mate!
5'd
left me staring
this was incredible. it had the continuity of a story and plot with the variety of a collab and great richness in color and expression. everyone did a great job and your works complemented each other. i bow to you all.
I must chastise myself
i need to apologise bro. i watched this and was pretty entertained to say the least. i little too much language just coz i'm not a fan of that but anyhow, you have a very unique sense of humor and i think your audio message made me think a little more about the previous comment i made on the aweseome episode comment you responded to. sure the art is rough but i guess its the style your going for and if salad fingers can be populare, why not this lol. anyhow, i just kinda realised we're both coming from the same angle and i need to apologise. i felt especially bad after you mentioned you have my DVD lol!
anyhow, best of luck, ignore my comments previous to now and keep up the fight. respect from me, and wishing you all the luck for the future-
-JAZZA.
oh, and i know you're great at this AWESOME stuff, but i'd personally love to see something different eventually. keep what you're doing now up, but i think you have a ton of potential art wise and you have a great whit, so lemme know when something refined comes up. have a good one dude.
Hey man, that means a lot to hear from you.
Yes there are a few different things coming in the future. One project in particular I'm completely toiling over and I really really want to see the light of day. It's not in the "Awesome" style... it very cleaned up and stylized and I hope you can appreciate it!
Still a huge fan of your work, man, and I'll be watching for years to come! Good luck on the missionary work, man. That's totally righteous. When you come back I'll still be a fan!
wonderful job
i really liked how everything was set up, i like the minimal talking to convey the story, i'm a huge fan of that method of story telling because i think it allows is to chose to delve into the plot and make judgements for ourselves of the characters. You also seem to have a very good sense of how to tell a story. i noticed a lot of things that you didn't NEED to do to get the point across, such as the view of him at the trafic lights from te baby in the cars perspective, but they really show a couple of things really well. first that there is a world beyond just this character, and secondly, it just shows a great crativity and effort, polish to your final work. The fbf was a little gough and inconsistent at times, for instance now and then he would have really chubby cheek or really different hair, for that matter i still don't 100% know what look was HIS, but still you executed it enough to tell the story without any problems. i also like the concept of bringing things back to the begining for a fresh start (dont know if you've seen the composer, that's what i was going for) and i think you did a great job!!
congratulations on a good work, i was entartained as i am sure were many, and i'd be dissapointed for you if you didnt ace your school project with this.
thank you, and congrats
-JAZZA
Thank you for your review, yes i have watched the composer(I really enjoyed it) the whole story was able to be refreshed in your mind at the end. My technical skill is still not very strong but im trying to work on it and I can see im getting better, especially with characters and anatomy. Good luck with your future projects and ill see you around.
Oh and I did ace my project =)
good job
really great art, imagery was nice
the few things that stood out in terms of needing work are the following:
1-too low frame rate, 'looks' laggy when it isnt, i recommend bringing it up to at LEAST 22-30
2-audio was a bit muffly, i liked to scottish accent but with thick sounding audio the theck accent is even harder to understand.
3-lip synching is a little off in places and sometimes either over or under exaddurated.
apart from these things the art was much better then many newgrounds submissions. if there would be anything to improve in the art though, i think you shoudl add some depth of shadow or shading to the characters rather then just one color fills
congratulations, i was entertained all the way through as i am sure were many others
4/5 8/10
LOL... you silly billy
oh SWAIN you Mo-Fo
i love how your experimenting in some really nice unique styles bro, continuing your sexy legacy. This episode was really funny, and the lighting was awesome as well!
keep up the awesome work, and know that if you ever need a shoulder to cry one, i'll be there.
your buddy-
-JAZZA
The BeeGees once got so big that they were hated for their proliferation, even though they were generally loved for their talent. Mastermind is such an easy series to create that I don't want to risk flooding the portal with them, so it may have to remain our little guilty pleasure for a while <3
And I don't want to fall into the habit of recycling backgrounds, so the next one will have to be as experimental as the first ones were!
Josiah Brooks is a full time YouTuber/Artist who likes music, beer, beef jerky, and writing profile summaries in the third person.
Age 35, Male
Artist
victoria, australia
Joined on 10/31/03