I'm guessing the pedophile you mentioned in your last entry will be the priest. He's going to rape that altar boy isn't he? If your first episode deemed Larry making out with his dead father's head suitable, I'm guessing butt-raping the kid will be what you have in mind, or is it? (That seems to be a favorite habit of yours. Will a character have that habit? XD)
Remember my advice: Don't make the protagonist too strong; it'll ruin your series. Make sure if he wins, make it 2 out of 3. It's the rule of thumb: 2-3 rule for good guys - the first time he wins by beating weakling underlings. The 2nd time he struggles with a harder opponent and comes out beaten and bruised, but victorious. Then he gets cocky and he underestimates the opponent and he falls under fire. If you want to make us feel more for the good guy, constantly screaming, "Come on, you can do it!" then you can use the 2-3 rule for bad guys. Bad guys win 2 out of 3. That would be better actually.
Ever seen tetris'd or superpope (on newgrounds) or neenja? Those are great series, but with major flaws: Their characters f*ing win all the time and without even getting a scratch. Then what's the point of having the bad guy? Larry needs to get his ass kicked 1~2 times out of 3. I'm sure you'll arrange that.
You live in Australia? I didn't know that! I might be going there to study medicine next year - either to Adelaide (Flinders University), Brisbane (University of Queensland) or Sydney (University of Sydney). I would have considered Melbourne, but Victoria's so fucking expensive. Or is it? Can you tell me how the living expenses are before I think about applying there?
I'm ranting, aren't I?
Nick
bleeduntildeath
I see that priest with his little smile "larry looks very tight, can't wait to break him in" and larry is all "I look like a girl in this think, I hope dad likes it" and... boy... I really do have demented issues don't I? ah well, I hope larry meets a girl who likes to "tickle" random strangers with sharp pointy objects..... hail jatan (that's the name of the boy jesus and satan had together)
Jazza
... what?