Jazza's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Seven Pillars]

I've looked at a couple of your other works and I feel like you are improving, so keep working! That being said, you have a long way to go. Don't be discouraged by any means, we all start somewhere! Your character design of the guy on the left is good, accentuated in stylistically appropriate places. The coloring needs work though, it's pretty rough, so keep practicing and you'll get there! Thanks for sharing

ZiroSkill responds:

Thank you for your critique! I'll keep working on it :)

[DA Raynesinnette- Leiya OC]

Fantastic! I love your style, you have some great things going on here. Clean linework, very good use of shade and color, and the character design and solidity is really good. Thanks for sharing and keep up the great work!

MeMyselfAndEyes responds:

Awe, thanks very much for the compliments and the video feature~
Sorry 'bout the sloppy pixel scraps (only noticed them in the video). I thought I got rid of them all but apparently I missed a VERY large amount of them. Need to keep an eye out and find a more effective way of locating them.

[The Frankenstein Monster]

Great job! I'd be curious to use Corel Painter, it seems you can get really cool textures with it. Anyhow, your form and lighting are good, the colors and sense of solidity work well, overall you've doen a great job! Keep up the good work

sfzapgun responds:

Thank you, Josiah. I admire your work and consider you the best teacher on the web. Thank you for your kind words. You are my hero.

[My World of Darknes character]

Thanks for your kind words in your PM to me sharing me this image. I'm glad you appreciate my stuff :) Your image here is a great start! your colors are strong, the sense of balance and the images solidity work well. Your linework and anatomy could improve, these things come with time and practice. Keep it up, you're doing well!

AgentofDarkness responds:

Thank you for taking the time to critique my artwork, it means a lot to me. Your tutorials have been inspirational, I now strive for greatness.

[Thor Trolling Loki]

Hahaha, a very clever and cheeky idea! Your characters are simple in shape and style but their use in the execution of the gag is effective and funny. Good job! Keep it up

[Illidan Stormrage]

Nice job! You've done well in creating a dramatic representation of the character. Your lines are clean, just a little thick. Your colors work well, though your shading could stand to be more ambitious, keep at it! Overall the image has a nice balance and you show good potential, keep it up!

[Dusk or dawn?]

Thanks for the kind plug! I appreciate it! Your image is nice, it has a good aesthetic and sense of balance. The colors work well together. The painting itself leaves something to be desired but the more you do it the more you will improve and this is a great start! Keep up the good work!

[Pin-up Girl]

Very nice job - the linework is on the surface, very good, but when zoomed in you can see it's a little rougher than first observed. I'd recommend making sure your linework is clean, especially when there are no other colors or shade to the image - if the linework is the only feature or medium in the image, make sure you take care in making it clean and good! Otherwise, a great drawing :)

AniToons responds:

I'll take your comments onboard good sir. Next piece will have a lot more attention to detail.

[My new anime Series - 1st char]

Great character design, and as a piece, great overall! Your linework is clean, your colors are soft and lovely, though the shading could be a little more prominent, and the proportions and figure work well. Keep it up!

[Out of Order char designs 1]

I love it! You have a fantastic eye for how to use shape well and create memorable characters! They're really great. Your lines and colors are clean and stylistically interesting, the silhouettes are strong, I could go on. Keep up the awesome work and thanks for sharing!

kmau responds:

Thanks man, hope their personalities will be memorable too. Some still need to be fleshed out.. got a lot to write!