Jazza's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Super mario thing......]

This is great! Fantastic use of color and shading, made even more impressive by the fact you did it in such a short time, and with a mouse! Great job :) The clouds could use some work, they look both a tad too 'soft' while trying to add a solid, almost too solid, black lined face, and strange contrast. Overall, a well done piece, keep it up, thanks for sharing!

Golden-Chicken responds:

Thanks for the kind words mate! :D
I agree with you 100%. I basically made the clouds as fast as i could. (Was getting nuts from working with that damn mouse! DX) And personally, i didn't focus on the backgrounds very much, except that damn question mark!!
Jesus, I almost killed myself trying to make that look right! :'(
I hate it when you can't get the perspective right.... :(

But thank you for taking the time to look at it, and give it some great feedback. :)
And also thank you for showing my art on your video :D

[Astral Addiction]

Hey there! It's coming along, I'd be happy to scout you but I think you could use some more experience first. Keep practicing and working hard, you'll get there. This piece is interesting and entertaining, it could use refinement in its solidity and structure, as well as more crisp linework and perhaps some shading or color of some kind. Thanks for sharing, keep it up!

Kairos responds:

Thank you for reviewing and for the pointers!

[tiger]

I'm not entirely sure how you did this piece, the colors are fantastic and the composition is good, I fet a strong feeling there are a lot of standard photoshop filters at use here, which tends to make an wrtwork look a bit cheap, in particular with the plants in the background and the tigers edges. Its a good start, I'd like to see how you go making something a little more from scratch. Thanks for sharing, keep it up!

[Migraines!]

I gotta be honest, I have no idea what to make of this, haha. Its painted quite well and has good use of gradients and shading, I just don't know what it is! That said, you've gone a good job regardless, and it definitely interesting to look at heh. Thanks for sharing!

Revolutsia responds:

I have no idea what it is either, I just went with a general shape, winged it, and this is what I got.
Thanks for the review!

[Viciouslisk]

Holy shi- nice! I LOVE the legs. They really stand out, how youve layered the shadow, and shine. It feels like a tanjible material. Other parts of the image could use work, mainly the texture and shading of the pink fleshy material, but the image overall has a very strong silhouette, and impressive aesthetic. Great work!

DuDuL responds:

Thanks man! Yeah now that i see that picture after a week i can see the legs standing out a lil too much compared to the rest. Cheers

[The Purple mage]

For a first piece this is very ambitious! And thats a GOOD thing! You'll improve over time with proportions and shading, but it's great that you're ready to challenge yourself and create pieces that you enjoy and want to actualize. Great work, keep it up!

[Arin Hanson]

lol!

[Messing with the lions]

Great work, the lion and main character in particular look very well done, though I would remark that the linework of the background is very thick and makes it hard to see immediately where the action begins and ends. Overall a good piece, thanks for sharing!

artbyjessed responds:

Thanks for the feedback!

[gargoyle]

This is very well done, the proportions could affort to be slightly more solid looking, but the color and tone of the image is fantastic. Especially the texture in which you've done the shading! A great piece, thanks for sharing!

[Ying Yang]

This is great! Their forms and anatomy are very solid. I know from experience it can be very hard drawing two people interacting, because we're such squishy organic objects and making it believable can be quite hard. You've done a great job. Your coloring could use a little work, but I think thats more the translation from paper to a digital image, so I can't be harsh on that, overall you've done a great job. Thanks for sharing!