Jazza's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[New Dante]

Nice work! The character is well proportioned and colored, and the image well balanced. The image lacks shading and depth, and would benefit with the addition of some kind of environment, that aside you've done well, keep it up!

dangmaster responds:

thank you very much for your response^^

i am really glad you told me what i lack^^ so i will try work on the elements you pointed out.

[Horizon: Elliot Versus Ambrose]

The character on the left is much more interesting, better proportioned and more dramatic and visually appealing pose. The weapons look cool as well as the clothing, though the forms could be more solidly proportioned. That aside you've done well, I hope you continue your re-invigorated passion to draw again, you have potential, keep it up :)

CrimsonReverie responds:

getting things in the right proportions has always been a tough one for me, but thanks so much for the feedback and the words of encouragement! ^.^

[Untitled.]

T'would be nice if you named your painting ;) It well done, the tone and atmosphere are strong, so is the characters form, thoug hte red lighting is too flat looking, try doing the lighting additions as an overly on a layer above using a blend mose like multiply or screen. The shading is also a little cloudy and less than solid, but overall you're doing very well, keep it up!

[Summers morning]

Great work! This image shows a good understanding of shape and strong silhouette. The colors and simple style work very well, and tge simplicity of the piece is great, though the signature is a little too strong, i'd make it at least 50% more transparent since it takes away from the aesthetic somewhat. Great job, nice to see you expanding your horizons!

[Peace by the Waterfall]

Nice work, great color balance and brust texture, the letters CLS look sloppy and out of place though. It's nice to see a traditional artwork of this nature though, you've done very well, keep it up!

[IM CHILD]

Creepy! Just how I like it ;) Very clean linework and good use and mixing of color, the image composition and overall design is clever and well done. I like the text and how it mixes with the image, and the bizzarre nature of the design. Great job, keep it up!

[Rosalina]

Simple but clean and well drawn! The simplicity is actually very complementarity to your style. The colors balance well and everything is simple but effective! You clearly have some skill! I'd like to see how you go wit something a little more ambitious. Keep it up :)

sylvrn responds:

Thank you! I'm planning on getting a tablet sometime around Christmas so I hope to draw more then. :D

[Shipwreck]

The aesthetic is really really nice here. Great image composition and atmosphere. The painting strokes are less than solid, a bit sloppy in places, but overall well communicated, things such as water and weather. Keep up the good work!

[Do no harm]

VERY nice! Your coloring and image composition are fantastic! Clean paintwork, much improved over the tron girl image you sent me, and the lighting and drama is great. The name in the corner of the image really takes away from it in my opinion though, it's unclean and removes some of the polish that the image holds on its own. Otherwise fantastic work, keep it up!

[Zombie Brand]

VERY cool! Fantastic pose, lighting, color, linework, the only thing lacking in this image is a dramatic environment. That aside, you've done amazingly well, I'm very impressed. I'll add this piece to my favorites. I love how well you did with this pose and anatomy, though the shoulder muscle on his right arm is too long, but that's just me being picky. Keep up the great work!

Dakuto responds:

Thank you so much for your comment and adding this piece to your favourites, I feel honored!
I have never been good at backgrounds and this is something I really have to work on, and I will!
Just as anatomy.. Anyhow, thanks again for the comment and keep up the great video's and art!